Ok, so Mr. Carter got to me. I am now a poet. This year has changed me so much.
I WANT A MAN
I want a man
who understands
my plan
for a better life
without worry or strife
I want a man
who tells me
that beauty
is about more than
the clothes I wear
or what I do with my hair
I want a man
who sees
how easy I am to please
who just wants to make me happy
especially when I feel crappy
I want a man
not a boy
who thinks girls are a toy
to be used and abused
a notch on the bedpost
a contest to see
who can get the most
I want a man
who respects me
and let me be whatever I wanna be
who tells me I can achieve that dream
however hard it might seem
I want a man
not a bro
who thinks life is so
easy and plays immature games
to earn that "bad boy" fame
I want more
more than cheap lust
and sly glances at my bust
I want someone I can trust
to stay true
and make life feel new
I want an Irish man
a Scottish man an English man
a foreign man an exotic man
an artistic man a linguistic man
a band man a music man
a sensitive man a man's man
I want a man
I want so much more
But is that too much to ask for?
awesome brynn. the rhyme was awesome. this is the best you have ever written imo but thats just me. and no, it isnt to much to ask for.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It was a spontaneous post-Beatnik poem but I really enjoy it. It expressed some things that I couldn't get out any other way.
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